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Jeuretics Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018
What do you like about shirt grabs?
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After seeing a lot of your ideas, I've been wondering what do you have for Sasuke? Like how would you develop him?
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GeneralDodders Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017
Are you asking about development in terms of his abilities or character?
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Thunderland47 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017
His character
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So this is how I develop Sasuke in my story:

After his family is killed, Sasuke is raised by Mikoto's parents. As they are disheartened by their daughter's death, Sasuke's grandparents never discourage Sasuke from seeking vengeance against Itachi. When Sasuke leaves the village to find Orochimaru, his grandparents are overcome with guilt for not being there for him when he needed them. 

When Sasuke leaves the Leaf Village, the leader of the Hidden Shadow Village, Fukushuu Tasogare, infiltrates Orochimaru's base and kills him. He then seizes all of Orochimaru's research and assets. When Sasuke arrives, Fukushuu takes him in to train him to kill Itachi. Fukushuu also uses his special abilities to activate Sasuke's Mangekyo Sharingan without him having to kill a loved one.

The Leaf Village manages to acquire a Bikochu beetle which they use to track Sasuke to the Shadow Village's hideout. Realizing that the Leaf tracked Sasuke to him, Fukushuu orders his apprentice Rensho Atsumori to kill the Uchiha and take his Sharingan. Before Rensho can finish Sasuke, Naruto and Sakura step into protect him. During the brawl, Rensho accuses Sasuke for being no different than Itachi for abandoning his village, severing his bonds with everyone who cared for him, and trying to kill his closest friends for the sake of power. As Sasuke dwells on Rensho's words, he watches Naruto and Sakura risk their lives o protect him even after everything he did to them. He also remembers how during the fight with Gaara he told Naruto that he never wanted to experience losing the people he cared for most again. It is in this moment that Sasuke decide not sever the bonds with his friends; he is still intends to kill Itachi but vows not to become him. Sasuke manages to drive off Rensho and then he is brought back to the Leaf Village, where he stays to learn to use his Mangekyo Sharingan from Kakashi. I feel under these circumstances Sasuke's friendship with Naruto and Sakura would have a stronger foundation than in the canon because they have more time together.

While Sasuke trains in the Leaf during the 2.5 year period he ends up developing a relationship with Sakura. Eventually Sasuke leaves the village to kill Itachi, but after that he learns from Tobi the truth of Itachi and why his family was killed. It is then that Sasuke realizes that the friendships and happy memories in the Leaf Village were built on the blood of his clan and he vows revenge. The Naruto/Sasuke relationship here would be more like the Hashirama/Madara relationship: first they were friends, then they were enemies, then they were friends again, then they became enemies again. Also since Sasuke and Sakura would have some more chemistry it would make SasuSaku more believable.

In addition, when Sasuke goes to kill Danzo at the Five Kage Summit, the Shadow Village launches a full scale attack which Sasuke uses as a distraction (thereby eliminating the need for him to kill numerous samurai as in the canon and trying to make him appear less like a psychopath).

Itachi still gets reanimated by Kabuto and freed from his crow he placed in Naruto. He then goes off to find Sasuke and tells him his side of the story. He also tells Sasuke the story of Madara and Hashirama as he heard from Hiruzen who heard it from Hashirama. It is then that Sasuke vows to become the Hokage that Itachi could not become and goes to join the Shinobi Alliance in the war. In order to help gain their trust by saving Sakura who was turned into a puppet by Sasori (you would have to look at the series "The Cherry Blossom Puppet" I commissioned dannex009 to draw. However, his intentions involve killing of the jinchuriki in order to destroy the tailed beasts so that no one can use them for wars again (which would lead to the final fight between Naruto and Sasuke).

When Sasuke ends up fighting the leader of the Shadow Village, Fukushuu, it is revealed that he was the one who orchestrated the Uchiha coup d'état by manipulating Fugaku with the hopes of having the Leaf and Uchiha destroy each other. Long ago, the Tasogare Clan were wiped out by Madara Uchiha while Hashirama Senju and the Leaf failed to do anything. Fukushuu's father was the sole survivor of the massacre and was imbedded with a deep searing hatred for the Uchiha and the Leaf. This hatred was then drilled into his son who was raised to ensure that both the Uchiha and the Leaf paid for what they did to their clan. As Sasuke's actions were driven by avenging his family, Fukushuu's actions were driven by avenging his. Together, Naruto and Sasuke manage to defeat Fukushuu and Sasuke kills him.
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CrazyWolf76 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2017
Dud ive seen your oc characters drawn by matt wilson and stories done by dannex09, and I gotta say you got an amazing imagination that really, could of helped make naruto better in the canon series, i liked the power ups you gave to sakura and hinata, and the storys oh sakura being a puppet and hinata going all beast mode, is awesome, im currently watching sasuke vs sakura by dannex09, but just want you to know I like your storys and oc, and cant wait to see more
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GeneralDodders Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2017
Thanks a lot man, that really means a lot to me. I just felt that Kishimoto didn't devote enough time to the abilities of a lot characters which is why their jutsu is extremely limited, especially Sakura and Hinata. Those two girls had so much potential but Kishimoto just ignored them and focused the spotlight on Naruto and Sasuke. I also didn't like how he handled how their respective relationships turned out; while I do support both NaruHina and SasuSaku, I would have tried to make them a little more believable. I have all these ideas for my own personal Naruto fanfiction, but sadly I am not a writer nor an artist so I can't put it to paper. All I can do is pay other artists to bring my ideas to life for me. You can tell based on all the jutsu and oc ideas I had mattwilson draw and the backstories provided on those pictures how different the Naruto would be if it were done my way.
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CrazyWolf76 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2017
Hey man no prob, not everyones perfect, but its ok, you paying other artist in other countries is totally cool, cuase i dont know if you know but matt wilson does this online draw and chat every sunday on you tube, you should check it out, but he literally draws for a living, its what pays his bills and supplies, so your commisions helps people like him out, without your ideas well he probably be bored with limited supplies, but thats the beauty of fan fiction, it brings to life ideas of other works, that could of happen or what we the fans want to see happen, so yeah man your ideas are awesome.
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articuno111 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry, I found you're profile out of random because I had to tag 3 people for this raffle,
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